Isn’t it enough that I let you see
Isn’t it enough that that I have let you see me bleed
As long as I allow you to share
Isn’t it enough for you to just care
I will not ask you to dwell inside my lifes shell
Nor ask you to share my personal hell
It is mine and mine alone
Perhaps the only thing I possess
The only thing that I own.
Isn’t it enough that I bare my soul
Isn’t it enough that you know I’m not whole
As long as I trust you enough to let you see me
Isn’t that enough for you to let me be me
I can not allow anyone else to live in my shell
Nor allow any to share my personal hell
It is mine and mine alone.
Perhaps its the only thing I possess
That No oneΒ can lay a claim on
Isn’t it enough that I see your needs
Isn’t it enough that I see your deeds
Isn’t it enough to show you I care
Without crawling in and sharing your lair
One we are
One we will be
It is the only thing we own
Let it be enough that I allow you inside to see
How I decorate my own home
Beautiful poem, beautiful words, you have talent!
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Thank you for reading and your lovely compliment ! ; )
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As you wish Sis. ; )
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Bro, I am reblogging this in this week.. Hope you don’t mind.. π
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I am flattered ! : )
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Not as much as I am with your post.. π
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Then you are sweet ! ; )
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Can I repeat, not as much as you are.. π
But wait, my narcissistic mind is screaming to delete that.. Before it heads over, I’m hitting send.. π
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Whew, that was close .
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Yeah very very close.. My narcissist head is whining now.. π
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Beautiful.
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Fabulous, William
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Thanks, Rita ! ; )
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My pleasure
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I know it was ! ; )
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WOW
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You are welcome ! ; )
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BTW That depth of sharing requires an incredible depth of trust, don’t you think ?
[Except for the floss part.
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great poem with an unexpected last line. though when it comes to sharing, I’m very much for sharing each other’s personal hell too or else it ain’t sharing π
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It is not so much the sharing it is the fact of living. We are born to the earth as an individual unit and no matter how much we share …….Louis LaMour was an American western writer and storyteller among many other things. An excerpt from one of his books comes to my mind, “we come into this world alone and we leave it alone.” We spend our time here trying to alleviate the lonliness. [mine]
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very true, however I’m still for sharing everything, including personal hell and dental floss π
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LOL!
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I believe that we are all interdependent, vital to each other … we are not islands! For example did you make your fishing rod, boat and cap/clothes from scratch? na we rely on each other …
Loneliness is just a state of mind and we can change those states by changing our attitude – I’m a work in progress. Try it for yourself?
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I agree that a large portion of our happiness lies in our ability to interact with others and I receive great joy from it. The physical facts remain that we are sealed and separated from one another genetically. Maternal twins and a very few individuals can share the closeness depicted as “soul mates” successfully and for any extended time ! Still the joy is in the search and therefore we search on. This is only my opinion and I could be wrong ! Thanks for sharing ! ; )
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This is so beautifully written. π
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Coming from someone with your talent this means a lot! Thank you !
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you are too generous. i am glad you liked my words π
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You’re stronger than I could be, to show where you bleed, and how.
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with false bravado he writes, “what dont kill ya makes ya stronger” Thank you for your response.
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I love the flow of your words, with so much ease you have conveyed your word. It’s lovely. π
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You are too kind. Thank you. π
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You’re welcome! π
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